A QUEST
One of the most important decision that I had made is when I traveled from El Salvador to this country.
I remember the day, it was a day after my birthday it was almost four years, it was dificult because I didn’t know what was going to happen to me.
I remember the day, it was a day after my birthday it was almost four years, it was dificult because I didn’t know what was going to happen to me.
Iwas nervous and sad because I was going to leave my friends and I didn’t know when I was going to see them again.
But I wanted to travel because I wanted to see my mother and my sister.
I think if I come to El Salvador I would make this decision again to see my family.
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16:36:42
It’s always difficult to go to a new country and make new friends. I like how you’ve expressed your feelings. Ms. Miller
Raquel, is this about a “quest” or a “choice”. I think you are writing about a choice! Or, go back and explain why it is a “quest”…to find your mother and sister.
This must have been such a difficult choice to make. You must be a strong person because of this! I hope now you are happy with your family:>
You have some run-ons, like this one: I remember the day, it was a day after my birthday it was almost four years, it was dificult because I didn’t know what was going to happen to me.
Put capitals and periods.
Ms. F